Monday, May 25, 2009

Field Trip Writings

Has anyone got some writing they would like to post after their field trip?

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  1. A tired seagull heaves itself up, into the air, narrowly missing a dark bumper.
    The acrid, metallic scent of exhaust fumes nausiate me.
    As I open my mouth to speak a cold sooty dryness latches itself to my tongue, and my lips pucker in disgust.
    A loud horn sounds from behind me and a grunty engine revs into life.
    My fingers fly up to my cheeks in fright. At each point contact, an icyness trickles out; seeping through the warm flesh.

    By Me :P

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  2. I actually had a really good time. Yum food, great discussion. Thought I might get more points for being 'deep' and 'emotional' though. hehe.

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  3. For sure more points for the deep stuff, but glad you had fun as well! Thanks for the posts.

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  4. OOPS! I wrote that last comment while Tom was signed in to this computer (Not Mr. Thom - another Tom!) The comment was from me, Tia!

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